Error Detection and Correction

with reading

Correction: Despite or in spite of.

snuuiu uc occurreu. iNfcvtK use wouiu immediately alien/.

Correction: So did Jean. Did agrees in tense past with the main sentence verb studied.

Correction: Had told. This is a past unreal condition. Would have attended. . . had told.

Correction: Hardly ever. Hardly is a negative word and cannot be used with another negative.

insisted on

Correction: It is redundant to say both… as well as.

Correction: Too much.

Correction: Advertised or that had been advertised. This is a relative clause in passive voice and can be reduced.